Hlep

[Damascus]

This (http://users.on.net/~bplee/Pics/WORKPLEASE.jpg) is a fastish illustration created for a school assignment. I intended it to be used to give a sense of the lighting and atmosphere in the level I'd designed, rather than to be an accurate, well balanced piece of fine art.

If anyone has any constructive comments to make on it, please do.

If anyone feels the need to derail...feel free too. I'd do it to any thread you made.

[HooB]

Needs more virgins, virgins and blood, other than that it looks quite cool altho maybe a wee bit too dark

[Damascus]

Yeah I get that alot when I do stuff on my home computer...think it's my monitor. I'll try touching up the brightness/levels tomorrow on the school computers.

I'd very much like to do more blood and virgins, but they'd not add to the information I'm trying to convey with this particular image T_T

[Damarus]

I like how the ceiling is so dark it almost looks like it just keeps going, but needs more floor imo.

[Damascus]

Humm yeah, I don't think I covered the floor in enough detail in any of the other illustrations and skestches for the level, cept for the texture I made...come to think of it, it is kinda odd having the floor as that solid black chunk... @.~

[Archaos]

needs more me.

[Damascus]

You're in there, but there's a pillar in the way.

[Grog]

as an art student, i hate you

[Damascus]

You hate me as an art student, or you are an arts student and you hate me? Or both?

[Grog]

all three

[Damascus]

That's like both, but more.

I also made this (http://users.on.net/~bplee/Pics/Temple/arch%20detail%20colour.jpg) today to give more information on the windows and to prove that the texture I'd made tiles well.

Too bad it's nothing at all like I wanted the wall texture to look like. You can't have everything!

What are you studying Grog?

[HooB]

those lower windows seems to be floating which can't be practical at all

[mono]

it needs a stargate and some robots with eyes that shoot lasers imo...

[HooB]

it needs a stargate and some robots with eyes that shoot lasers imo...
And bloody sacreficed virgins, for the love of god do not forget the virgins!

[mono]

You had already said that so I didn't think I needed to say it too... :P

[HooB]

that was the first picture, I thought you were commenting on the second one with windows

[Grog]

What are you studying Grog?
fine art A level, so no fancy computer shit :/

[Damascus]

it needs a stargate and some robots with eyes that shoot lasers imo...

Funny you should say that - part of the design brief was to set it within the Stargate universe.

And yeah those windows are kinda fucked lol. Should probably take the glow away and make the stone framework around it cast a glow. If I had more time I'd work in more details like keystones and border stones on the arches etc...but I don't have time T_T just making more crap to try and boost my grade now lol

fine art A level, so no fancy computer shit :/

The skills you learn there should be pretty easily transferrable, particularly if you could get your hands on a wacom tablet.

[Grindrolas]

You gonna relocate to Canada and work for me Dama? ;)

[CharlieM]

SG1 universe, I am all about that shit.
First things first, it looks fucking awesome, except it has no ground.

Needs more ground.

Seccond thing, the red hue thats outlining most the structure, I would change that to either a subtle light blue, or yellow.
Ive never seen a red gould mothership, so -- points there bub.

Otherwise, needs more floor.

Also above the central piece, you need like the head of one of those horse looking god things, the same sorta helmet look that the jafa wear (when its all the way up), as a religious icon centerpeice.

[Pseudonymous]

That's like both, but more.

I also made this (http://users.on.net/%7Ebplee/Pics/Temple/arch%20detail%20colour.jpg) today to give more information on the windows and to prove that the texture I'd made tiles well.

Too bad it's nothing at all like I wanted the wall texture to look like. You can't have everything!

What are you studying Grog?

is that mortar between the bricks or the blood of virgins<.<?
(btw, i like it:smile:)

[Damascus]

SG1 universe, I am all about that shit.
First things first, it looks fucking awesome, except it has no ground.

Needs more ground.

Seccond thing, the red hue thats outlining most the structure, I would change that to either a subtle light blue, or yellow.
Ive never seen a red gould mothership, so -- points there bub.

Otherwise, needs more floor.

Also above the central piece, you need like the head of one of those horse looking god things, the same sorta helmet look that the jafa wear (when its all the way up), as a religious icon centerpeice.

lol I shoulda got you to comment on it earlier - handed it all up for marking today.

And I'll move to Canada when you start importing the finest asian women for me Grindy. Or maybe just give me an assured wage >.>

[Hclinton/Brokenex]

great work I think they might look better with a little perspective instead of just straight on views of what your drawing, unless that was one of the criteria or something t.t

[Damarus]

Tec'ma'te! Why didnt you say it was based in the stargate universe earlier Ha'shak?!

Charlie's right, could use the Anubis touch :p Pity its too late :(

[Grog]

yellow would've looked shit

[Damascus]

great work I think they might look better with a little perspective instead of just straight on views of what your drawing, unless that was one of the criteria or something t.t

Nah, I wanted to involve more perspective (and the floor) but I never actually intended to go that far with it - I had a flat 2d image made in Illustrator to just help myself visualise the shapes of the columns and arches...then I got carried away when I took that in to Photoshop.

Like how I had this (http://users.on.net/~bplee/Pics/Temple/arch%20detail.jpg), and after messing around for a few hours I had this. (http://users.on.net/~bplee/Pics/Temple/arch%20detail%20colour.jpg).

They're mostly just images made to give a modeller a better idea on what kind of texturing and lighting I'd like, as well as some idea of the geometry. We had the choice to model the level ourselves, but I'm pretty shit at it.

[Grindrolas]

lol I shoulda got you to comment on it earlier - handed it all up for marking today.

And I'll move to Canada when you start importing the finest asian women for me Grindy. Or maybe just give me an assured wage >.>
Lots of asians here, hot asians :p
I'll get on the wage, gimme a few years ;)

[Damascus]

A few years should give me time to get my skills to the point at which they're actually at a competitive, employable level @_@

[Bonk]

Didn't read all the posts but it's very red for stargate, most of the colours they use are not in that spectrum, like they use alot of blue's and greens, not alot of reds (seems more startrek then stargate). :D

[WiGgLr]

I'm trying to think up an ingenious way to derail this thread, but it's way too fucking hot here at work for me to think properly. 30C (86F) according to the thermometer, in England, in April.

DOUBLE YOU TEA EFF MATE


I'm going to eat a bounty before it melts any further

[Grog]

jesus, 30? im definitely staying indoors now

[WiGgLr]

jesus, 30? im definitely staying indoors now
this is inside :(

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/5/tempcx2.jpg

[Grog]

oh SHIT its monday??

[damme]

No it's saturday.

[Grog]

oh good

[Damascus]

Its saturmond.

[Grog]

montertag?

[Damarus]

30 is beautiful weather :( Its like low 20s where I live atm... Cold!!!

[damme]

23C here atm, thats some nice hot weather.

[WiGgLr]

outside was 23C, inside was 30C :(

[Damascus]

It's steamy hot weather inside...MY PANTS.

Which I'm not wearing. How odd...

[WiGgLr]

are you derailing your own thread?

[Grog]

since the hlep is no longer needed, yes

[Damascus]

are you derailing your own thread?

It's a sad, sad compulsion. Pants that is. I hate them.

[damme]

I declare today no pants day!

[Grog]

good thing i came dressed for the occasion

[Damascus]

Today is just finishing for me...10 minutes left of today. NO PANTS FOR TEN MINUTES!

[HooB]

I saw damme wear pants today, may I punish him ?

[Damascus]

Sure, what a fucking faggot, breaking his own fake rules. Such a fucking cunt piece of shit cunt flange ass.

[damme]

Lies, all lies I tell you!

[HooB]

Lies, all lies I tell you!

Pff only time you didnä't wear pants yesterday was when I spanked your silly as at practice :p
So how will it be should I kick your ass or just do it the american way and shoot you ?

[damme]

I'll just lie down on you and squish you like a uhm... pancake. Do you squish pancakes?

[HooB]

I'll just lie down on you and squish you like a uhm... pancake. Do you squish pancakes?
Ofcourse one can squish pancakes well atleast you could dunno about me, i'm more into bending and bashing you know

[damme]

Personally I do enjoy the leg triangle choke. Long flexible legs ftw.

[HooB]

also called beeing a monkey

[Damascus]

I choked my friend with my legs in high school. It was a clever move at the time.

[HooB]

I choked my friend with my legs in high school. It was a clever move at the time.

I bet it felt good too

[mono]

Nothing beats seeing your friends face turn blue/purple in your arms :twisted:

[Grog]

Sure, what a fucking faggot, breaking his own fake rules. Such a fucking cunt piece of shit cunt flange ass.
french language?

[Damascus]

Look flange up on urbandictionary, or ask Polarised.

[Zelaton]

30 is beautiful weather :( Its like low 20s where I live atm... Cold!!!
20C is cold!? lol....It's like 5C here! :( WTB summer!

[HooB]

From Urbandictionary

Flange:


Term used for describing non-deseribale vaginas.


Would you close your legs please, I can smell your rancid flange from here.

The sight that greeted me was not appealling - red, sore-looking spots surrounded her swollen flange.

[Grog]

i know, that's just what we call the french language assistant =P

[Damarus]

Yeah even I gathered that :p From the saying "excuse my french"

[Damascus]

i know, that's just what we call the french language assistant =P

Ohhhhhhhhh I get it...a few days later. ORC SMARF!